I love it!I hope this remains as the cover image.
I love this, very evocative, ominous even!
Great cover. It really makes you want to delve inside.
A title needs to be readable.Shrink down the triangle thingie 15-25% and place the text layer lower down the page so that the darker artwork behind it allows for contrast and increased legibility.
Or just make the title a little brighter so it stands out more.
This is good advice. Will have another take shortly!
Your names aren't big enough on the cover.