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1/15/2014

Dolmenwood | Cover Take 4


8 comments:

  1. Was always uncertain about the triangle thingy. Nice to see the cover without it.

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  2. I shall mourn the loss of the triangle embellishment, but this still looks really good. The title pops out a lot more now.

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  3. Ack! Don't mix the font sizes on the same line!

    I liked the triangle thing too. It drew the eye nicely down towards the door.

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  4. Just changing the weight of the 3rd line is enough. The illustration itself focuses to the door just fine. For a little more Arts&Craft, perhaps a shape/graphic blended with a stem or bar of the title letters. Lastly the kerning between L + M is off.

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  5. That works too.

    I read the text as oolmenwooo though, font ain't bad though it has just side-effect.

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  6. This is all good advice -- working on another take presently.

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